Sue and Kim: Commander Warlock's Origin part 1

So this started off as a comic short but i couldn't fit all the dialogue needed in the "Sue and Kim format" I may or may not do a story around this but for now i hope you're satisfied .. I will do and origin series for all characters at some point.... not my best work but photoshop was not being my friend and actually shut  down out of nowhere and I had to start over so yea its kinda rough and not as clean as the original which is lost forever

 Commander Warlock (Vonceal Warlock) comes from a long line of military men and women but was kidnapped as a young girl and forced to take part in the resurrected "Orion Project" also known as the "Spartan II" program. After her training was complete she survived the augmentations however she ended up washing out of the program due to her brains strange inability to sync into the Mjolnir armor's onboard computer. After training for this day for so long it broke her heart to find out that she could never be a Spartan. She then found out from an old friend about something known as the "Spartan breeding" program taking place on Reach. Where she could contribute by helping to produce the next gen Spartans via accelerated pregnancy. It was there that she met a strange woman known as the Doc and they became close friends. Shortly after her impregnation Reach was attacked by the covenant. The covenant destroyed the entire facility and killed most of the people there leaving only her, several scientist,and a hand full of ODST's. The group ended up going there separate ways when no one wanted to follow Warlock's idea to fight through the labs and get to the shuttle bay. Everyone saw that idea as much too dangerous and voted to bunker down and wait for reinforcements. She never heard from any of those soldiers or scientist again. She made it to the shuttle bay only to find an entire squad of Elites waiting for survivors to try and flee the planet. She managed to single-handedly take them all out and flee the planet just as it was glassed